--- www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2012/06/10 08:06:12	1.116
+++ www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2013/05/27 03:49:32	1.121
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 <link rel="alternate" title="What's New" href="http://www.gnu.org/rss/whatsnew.rss" type="application/rss+xml" />
 <link rel="alternate" title="New Free Software" href="http://www.gnu.org/rss/quagga.rss" type="application/rss+xml" />
 
-<!--#include virtual="/server/banner.html" -->
 <!--#include virtual="/philosophy/po/free-sw.translist" -->
+<!--#include virtual="/server/banner.html" -->
 
 <h2>What is free software?</h2>
 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 
 <p>
 In order for freedoms 1 and 3 (the freedom to make changes and the
-freedom to publish improved versions) to be meaningful, you must have
+freedom to publish the changed versions) to be meaningful, you must have
 access to the source code of the program.  Therefore, accessibility of
 source code is a necessary condition for free software.  Obfuscated
 &ldquo;source code&rdquo; is not real source code and does not count
@@ -173,8 +173,8 @@
 
 <p>
 Whether a change constitutes an improvement is a subjective matter.
-If your modifications are limited, in substance, to changes that
-someone else considers an improvement, that is not freedom.
+If your right to modify a program is limited, in substance, to changes that
+someone else considers an improvement, that program is not free.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -190,15 +190,6 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-A special issue arises when a license requires changing the name by
-which the program will be invoked from other programs.  That
-effectively hampers you from releasing your changed version so that it
-can replace the original when invoked by those other programs.  This
-sort of requirement is acceptable only if there's a suitable aliasing
-facility that allows you to specify the original program's name as an
-alias for the modified version.</p>
-
-<p>
 Rules that &ldquo;if you make your version available in this way, you
 must make it available in that way also&rdquo; can be acceptable too,
 on the same condition.  An example of such an acceptable rule is one
@@ -211,6 +202,15 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
+A special issue arises when a license requires changing the name by
+which the program will be invoked from other programs.  That
+effectively hampers you from releasing your changed version so that it
+can replace the original when invoked by those other programs.  This
+sort of requirement is acceptable only if there's a suitable aliasing
+facility that allows you to specify the original program's name as an
+alias for the modified version.</p>
+
+<p>
 In the GNU project, we use 
 <a href="/copyleft/copyleft.html">copyleft</a>
 to protect these freedoms legally for everyone.  But 
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
 and avoid various practical problems.
 </p>
 
-<h2 id="beyond-software">Beyond Software</h2>
+<h3 id="beyond-software">Beyond Software</h3>
 
 <p>
 <a href="/philosophy/free-doc.html">Software manuals must be free</a>,
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@
 free cultural works</a> applicable to any kind of works.
 </p>
 
-<h2 id="open-source">Open Source?</h2>
+<h3 id="open-source">Open Source?</h3>
 
 <p>
 Another group has started using the term &ldquo;open source&rdquo; to mean
@@ -332,11 +332,11 @@
 never refers to freedom</a>.
 </p>
 
-<h2 id="History">History</h2>
+<h3 id="History">History</h3>
 
 <p>From time to time we revise this Free Software Definition.  Here is
-the list of changes, along with links to show exactly what was
-changed.</p>
+the list of substantive changes, along with links to show exactly what
+was changed.</p>
 
 <ul>
 
@@ -454,18 +454,19 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Copyright &copy; 1996, 1997, 1998, 1999, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2004,
-2005, 2006, 2007, 2009, 2010 Free Software Foundation, Inc.
+Copyright &copy; 1996-2002, 2004-2007, 2009, 2010, 2012 Free Software 
+Foundation, Inc.
 </p>
 <p>This page is licensed under a <a rel="license"
 href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nd/3.0/us/">Creative
 Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 United States License</a>.
 </p>
 
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-Updated:
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+<p>Updated:
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-$Date: 2012/06/10 08:06:12 $
+$Date: 2013/05/27 03:49:32 $
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 </p>
 </div>