--- www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2012/06/23 11:02:26	1.117
+++ www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2012/07/01 10:12:02	1.118
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 
 <p>
 In order for freedoms 1 and 3 (the freedom to make changes and the
-freedom to publish improved versions) to be meaningful, you must have
+freedom to publish the changed versions) to be meaningful, you must have
 access to the source code of the program.  Therefore, accessibility of
 source code is a necessary condition for free software.  Obfuscated
 &ldquo;source code&rdquo; is not real source code and does not count
@@ -173,8 +173,8 @@
 
 <p>
 Whether a change constitutes an improvement is a subjective matter.
-If your modifications are limited, in substance, to changes that
-someone else considers an improvement, that is not freedom.
+If your right to modify a program is limited, in substance, to changes that
+someone else considers an improvement, that program is not free.
 </p>
 
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@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@
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 Updated:
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-$Date: 2012/06/23 11:02:26 $
+$Date: 2012/07/01 10:12:02 $
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