--- www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2011/07/13 17:30:48	1.104
+++ www/philosophy/free-sw.html	2011/08/03 19:27:40	1.105
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@
 
 <ul>
   <li>The freedom to run the program, for any purpose (freedom 0).</li>
-  <li>The freedom to study how the program works, and change it to make
-      it do what you wish (freedom 1). Access to the source code is a
-      precondition for this.
+  <li>The freedom to study how the program works, and change it so it
+      does your computing as you wish (freedom 1). Access to the source
+      code is a precondition for this.
   </li>
   <li>The freedom to redistribute copies so you can help your neighbor
       (freedom 2).
@@ -97,12 +97,13 @@
 <p>
 Freedom 1 includes the freedom to use your changed version in place of
 the original.  If the program is delivered in a product designed to
-run someone else's modified versions but refuse to run yours &mdash;
-a practice known as &ldquo;tivoization&rdquo; or (in its practitioners'
-perverse terminology) as &ldquo;secure boot&rdquo; &mdash; freedom 1 becomes a
-theoretical fiction rather than a practical freedom.  This is not
-sufficient.  In other words, these binaries are not free software
-even if the source code they are compiled from is free.
+run someone else's modified versions but refuse to run yours &mdash; a
+practice known as &ldquo;tivoization&rdquo; or &ldquo;lockdown&rdquo;,
+or (in its practitioners' perverse terminology) as &ldquo;secure
+boot&rdquo; &mdash; freedom 1 becomes a theoretical fiction rather
+than a practical freedom.  This is not sufficient.  In other words,
+these binaries are not free software even if the source code they are
+compiled from is free.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -311,6 +312,11 @@
 
 <ul>
 
+<li><a href="http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewvc/www/philosophy/free-sw.html?root=www&amp;r1=1.103&amp;r2=1.104">Version
+1.104</a>: Reflect, in the brief statement of freedom 1, the point
+(already stated in version 1.80) that it includes really using your modified
+version for your computing.</li>
+
 <li><a href="http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewvc/www/philosophy/free-sw.html?root=www&amp;r1=1.91&amp;r2=1.92">Version
 1.92</a>: Clarify that obfuscated code does not qualify as source code.</li>
 
@@ -425,7 +431,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
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-$Date: 2011/07/13 17:30:48 $
+$Date: 2011/08/03 19:27:40 $
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 </p>
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